tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post1515050107320380919..comments2023-06-14T11:53:19.364-04:00Comments on Cracker Jack Poet: Shifting TidesSaravhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comBlogger32125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-77366371157256565502014-06-23T19:05:33.348-04:002014-06-23T19:05:33.348-04:00Teardrops skating on a moonbeam is a such a vivid ...Teardrops skating on a moonbeam is a such a vivid bridge -- !<br />so well-written. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-75821662926581163542014-06-23T17:19:31.227-04:002014-06-23T17:19:31.227-04:00Jo-hanna, love your humor :-)Jo-hanna, love your humor :-)Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-1308775446143672822014-06-22T13:04:14.389-04:002014-06-22T13:04:14.389-04:00what's a hyphen between friends :-)
a bridge?what's a hyphen between friends :-)<br />a bridge? avalonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08051456576217305095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-89898277001018402692014-06-21T11:32:39.226-04:002014-06-21T11:32:39.226-04:00Hi Wendy! You always have such wonderful comments ...Hi Wendy! You always have such wonderful comments and enthusiasm. I really appreciate both :-) Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-40035216404922685142014-06-21T11:30:10.080-04:002014-06-21T11:30:10.080-04:00Hi Peggy! Thank you. I enjoyed the form and like y...Hi Peggy! Thank you. I enjoyed the form and like you I really enjoyed the poems from everyone :-) Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-19849975161221198702014-06-21T11:28:41.059-04:002014-06-21T11:28:41.059-04:00Hi! Thank you for the kind words :-) Hi! Thank you for the kind words :-) Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-6253794731208144042014-06-21T11:28:11.224-04:002014-06-21T11:28:11.224-04:00Hi Claudia! Yes it isn't always easy but defin...Hi Claudia! Yes it isn't always easy but definitely worth it :-) Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-10810255812440992592014-06-21T11:26:49.074-04:002014-06-21T11:26:49.074-04:00Hi Mary! That is a great idea!! It does kind of be...Hi Mary! That is a great idea!! It does kind of beg to be used again :-). Thank youSaravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-32306930289312451252014-06-21T09:45:54.871-04:002014-06-21T09:45:54.871-04:00Hi Donna! That is the truth. Thank you for that w...Hi Donna! That is the truth. Thank you for that wisdom :-)Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-84508677357024392342014-06-20T19:50:05.485-04:002014-06-20T19:50:05.485-04:00~Teardrops skating on a moonbeam~ Wow!!! What a br...~Teardrops skating on a moonbeam~ Wow!!! What a bridge. Wonderful connection between the 1st and 3rd stanzas: him and then her, with the shared bridge - perfect Puente subject matter. Really, an elegant well-crafted piece!Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-91227199907419964782014-06-19T18:29:55.963-04:002014-06-19T18:29:55.963-04:00Very well done bridge poem. This has been a new fo...Very well done bridge poem. This has been a new form to me this week and I have liked seeing how different writers handle it. thanks for sharingPeggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-46017178090666922372014-06-19T18:13:18.032-04:002014-06-19T18:13:18.032-04:00love this -- beautiful example of the bridge form;...love this -- beautiful example of the bridge form; gorgeous second stanza :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-69508227998726634112014-06-19T15:57:39.994-04:002014-06-19T15:57:39.994-04:00oh it is good to reach across the divide... victor...oh it is good to reach across the divide... victory is bitter indeed... when it comes to love there should be only winnersClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-63250088759942828372014-06-19T08:16:10.363-04:002014-06-19T08:16:10.363-04:00I really liked " Teardrops skating on a moo...I really liked " Teardrops skating on a moonbeam " which could actually launch into an entirely new poem if you ever were at a loss some day. Smiles. I too like the idea of love reaching across the divide. That is the best kind of love that can accomplish that!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-7975073523015539012014-06-19T08:10:39.109-04:002014-06-19T08:10:39.109-04:00Best to bridge a love divide as quickly as possibl...Best to bridge a love divide as quickly as possible... the chasms can grow and the bridge many not reach.Donna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-46161528030494941812014-06-19T07:56:45.441-04:002014-06-19T07:56:45.441-04:00Sorry autocorrect... Jo-hannaSorry autocorrect... Jo-hannaSaravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-39123922095425005572014-06-19T07:56:04.795-04:002014-06-19T07:56:04.795-04:00Hi Johanna! Always a welcome shift, thank you! :-...Hi Johanna! Always a welcome shift, thank you! :-) Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-61204821325511652192014-06-19T07:55:06.731-04:002014-06-19T07:55:06.731-04:00Hi Gabriella! I love how people see things that I...Hi Gabriella! I love how people see things that I don't--I was kind of playing with words using "armed" but you're right, it's strengthening too! Thank you:-) Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-39239173008891084162014-06-19T07:53:14.627-04:002014-06-19T07:53:14.627-04:00Hi Vandana! Yes, that's my belief too :-)Hi Vandana! Yes, that's my belief too :-) Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-51171983936795990332014-06-19T07:52:27.524-04:002014-06-19T07:52:27.524-04:00Hi Sumana! Thank you, I'm glad you felt like ...Hi Sumana! Thank you, I'm glad you felt like the bridge held up on both sides :-) Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-28162752813369909362014-06-19T07:51:32.256-04:002014-06-19T07:51:32.256-04:00Hi Brian! Enjoyed all the takes on the bridge at ...Hi Brian! Enjoyed all the takes on the bridge at PJ. And it did feel much better when we bridged the divide ;-) Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-79920961979935694532014-06-19T07:48:58.564-04:002014-06-19T07:48:58.564-04:00Hi Gillena! Thank you! I loved your take on the P...Hi Gillena! Thank you! I loved your take on the Puente :-) Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-14143591673709230642014-06-19T07:47:58.705-04:002014-06-19T07:47:58.705-04:00Hi Helen! Thank you! I love bridges, especially ...Hi Helen! Thank you! I love bridges, especially in music and poetry :-) Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-42070221474739179472014-06-19T07:47:07.344-04:002014-06-19T07:47:07.344-04:00Hi Laurie! Thank you. That was my favorite part ...Hi Laurie! Thank you. That was my favorite part too :-) Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-18015358803354461652014-06-19T06:03:42.055-04:002014-06-19T06:03:42.055-04:00that is a welcome shift, I'm sure.
beautifully...that is a welcome shift, I'm sure.<br />beautifully presented.avalonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08051456576217305095noreply@blogger.com