tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post7000971602647583559..comments2023-06-14T11:53:19.364-04:00Comments on Cracker Jack Poet: A Two-ferSaravhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-23943768590579710552013-04-02T20:51:19.537-04:002013-04-02T20:51:19.537-04:00Hi there Pearl!! So nice to see you. You always h...Hi there Pearl!! So nice to see you. You always have been the prolific poet :-) Thank you for stopping by!Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-61998380534236904882013-04-02T20:49:55.351-04:002013-04-02T20:49:55.351-04:00Hi Gautami!! Thank you very much. Your poem was ...Hi Gautami!! Thank you very much. Your poem was quite lovely too :-)Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-51186881656565735852013-04-02T18:43:45.203-04:002013-04-02T18:43:45.203-04:00Yes -agree with all those before me -enjoyed the f...Yes -agree with all those before me -enjoyed the form as well... Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem for the "other " challenge -I went nutty today and write 5 for PAD:)Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-67613089796416068262013-04-02T08:07:33.628-04:002013-04-02T08:07:33.628-04:00Hi Speck!! Thank you very much:-) Hi Speck!! Thank you very much:-) Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-18510646646791661582013-04-02T08:05:49.671-04:002013-04-02T08:05:49.671-04:00Hi Claudia!! This poem is after a couple of weeks...Hi Claudia!! This poem is after a couple of weeks with no dirty dishes in the sink or socks on the floor, the first week I was walking around unmoored, and feeling sad. Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-29756054685901481942013-04-02T08:02:44.099-04:002013-04-02T08:02:44.099-04:00Hi Brian!! Thank you for the compassionate comment...Hi Brian!! Thank you for the compassionate comments. Most of the time I can spot danger, but she caught me off guard...as to empty nesting, it does come very quickly, and you do miss the kids, but it's also nice to just be ;-)Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-36352388792363356312013-04-02T03:22:55.242-04:002013-04-02T03:22:55.242-04:00"We can breathe
Each other's
Thoughts&quo..."We can breathe<br />Each other's<br />Thoughts" - I loved this !!!Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-6803403138547151502013-04-01T23:49:59.347-04:002013-04-01T23:49:59.347-04:00breathing each others thoughts...so much intimacy ...breathing each others thoughts...so much intimacy in this.. and we're not too far away from the empty nest, it is challenging in a way but also a chance.. oh, but still need some time to get used to it...so feeling you in thisClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2804604204434634298.post-73931833041139495692013-04-01T23:19:17.822-04:002013-04-01T23:19:17.822-04:00excellent line breaks in the first one...love the ...excellent line breaks in the first one...love the breaking of words and playing off parts of it like the ships...trust is hard...i think on some level we want to give it because we want to believe in people...but then again, we end up burned...<br /><br />smiles on the second...my day will come soon enough...in some ways i look forward to the time with my wife, but know i will miss my sons...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com