Thursday, July 18, 2013

Mr. Hot Stuff

Half-closed eyes
See me, sear me
Then the walk
Samba slide
Confident glide
Makes me too hot
To be quenched by anything
But a cool dip into you

Peggy at Poetry Jam poetryjaam.blogspot.com asked us to write about something hot.  Summer here is inspiration enough, but a recent trip to Napa with my husband won out...happy weekend everyone!

36 comments:

  1. oo la la...a little samba dance with the hubby...he's obviously got the moves...ha...well played...

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    1. Hi Brian!! Yep, just having some fun. Thank you :-)

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    1. Hi Mama!! Thank you very much, really enjoyed your poem :-)

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  3. How wonderful to samba with the husband, fun poem! Hot, too :)

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    1. Hi Loredana! So glad you enjoyed it--thank you! :-)

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  4. Crackerjack yummy good .......

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    1. Hi Helen! Oh you made me giggle--great reply :-) Thank you

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  5. Really love the kind of heat you wrote about in this poem, Sara. I think the samba definitely would inspire that. Smiles!

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    1. Hi Mary! I enjoyed your take in heat as well--thank you :-)

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  6. This is sizzling, makes me hot reading it. Very nice.

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    1. Hi Alan! Great compliment, thank you! :-)

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  7. oh my oh my.... sizzling hot dance....dance on...smiles

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    1. Hi Claudia! I plan to, as long as I can move :-)

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  8. Sounds like it was a sizzling weekend! Great title for you poem too!

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    1. Hi Robyn! It was pretty nice, thank you. And that song always makes me laugh :-)

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    1. Hi Sreeja! Smiles right back at you :-)

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  10. "Samba slide
    Confident glide"
    flowed so well...sounds as if you had a 'hot' time! ;)

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    1. Hi Stacy! Nice to see you :-) It was a great weekend and a fun poem to write

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  11. nice sensual weekend! Cheers!

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    1. Hi Kathe! Thank you very much--it's been pretty crazy lately so it was really nice to get a break :-) Cheers!

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  12. Very nice. Napa is a lovely area--our daughter lives up there. Very spicy write here!! Delicious. Thanks for posting.

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    1. Hi Peggy! That's wonderful to have the inside track in Napa-- so many great restaurants--yum! Thank you for the great prompt :-)

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    1. Hi McGuffy! Thank you--it was fun to write :-)

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  14. Now that's hot! A spicy little piece Sara :-)

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    1. Hi De!! Welcome back home my prolific poetic friend
      :-) Thank you for stopping in

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  16. ha, i loved this poem! i write love poems to my partner of 12 years all the time, hope your husband enjoyed this as much as my sweetie, loves hers. *smiles*

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    1. Hi! Thank you--he did enjoy it, made him laugh, which is something I love to do :-)

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Your words are wonderful! Thanks for popping in--I'll be over in a snap!