Half-closed eyes
See me, sear me
Then the walk
Samba slide
Confident glide
Makes me too hot
To be quenched by anything
But a cool dip into you
Peggy at Poetry Jam poetryjaam.blogspot.com asked us to write about something hot. Summer here is inspiration enough, but a recent trip to Napa with my husband won out...happy weekend everyone!
oo la la...a little samba dance with the hubby...he's obviously got the moves...ha...well played...
ReplyDeleteHi Brian!! Yep, just having some fun. Thank you :-)
DeleteWhoa! Hot AND cool!
ReplyDeleteHi Mama!! Thank you very much, really enjoyed your poem :-)
DeleteA wonderful way to cool off!
ReplyDeleteHi Laurie! Yes, I think so ;-)
DeleteCrackerjack yummy good .......
ReplyDeleteHi Helen! Oh you made me giggle--great reply :-) Thank you
DeleteHi Loredana! So glad you enjoyed it--thank you! :-)
ReplyDeleteReally love the kind of heat you wrote about in this poem, Sara. I think the samba definitely would inspire that. Smiles!
ReplyDeleteHi Mary! I enjoyed your take in heat as well--thank you :-)
DeleteCool to find hot!
ReplyDeleteHi Ray! Yes it is ;-)
DeleteThis is sizzling, makes me hot reading it. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteHi Alan! Great compliment, thank you! :-)
Deleteoh my oh my.... sizzling hot dance....dance on...smiles
ReplyDeleteHi Claudia! I plan to, as long as I can move :-)
DeleteSounds like it was a sizzling weekend! Great title for you poem too!
ReplyDeleteHi Robyn! It was pretty nice, thank you. And that song always makes me laugh :-)
DeleteAh thats hot in a cool way...smiles~
ReplyDeleteHi Sreeja! Smiles right back at you :-)
Delete"Samba slide
ReplyDeleteConfident glide"
flowed so well...sounds as if you had a 'hot' time! ;)
Hi Stacy! Nice to see you :-) It was a great weekend and a fun poem to write
Deletenice sensual weekend! Cheers!
ReplyDeleteHi Kathe! Thank you very much--it's been pretty crazy lately so it was really nice to get a break :-) Cheers!
DeleteVery nice. Napa is a lovely area--our daughter lives up there. Very spicy write here!! Delicious. Thanks for posting.
ReplyDeleteHi Peggy! That's wonderful to have the inside track in Napa-- so many great restaurants--yum! Thank you for the great prompt :-)
DeleteDefinitely a poem with heat!
ReplyDeleteHi McGuffy! Thank you--it was fun to write :-)
DeleteNow that's hot! A spicy little piece Sara :-)
ReplyDeleteHi Jennifer! Thank you :-)
DeletePerfectly spicy! :)
ReplyDeleteHi De!! Welcome back home my prolific poetic friend
Delete:-) Thank you for stopping in
ha, i loved this poem! i write love poems to my partner of 12 years all the time, hope your husband enjoyed this as much as my sweetie, loves hers. *smiles*
ReplyDeleteHi! Thank you--he did enjoy it, made him laugh, which is something I love to do :-)
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