Make it deep and dark
Creamy soft
Enough
To dip a digit
In and swirl
A whirl of pleasure
And anticipation
At my fingertip
This is offered up for Alan's delicious prompt at poetryjaam.blogspot.com about glorious ice cream confections and "what would you top with a cherry?" Melted chocolate, chocolate frosting, chocolate mousse, ganache--you get the idea..short and sweet. Enjoy!
Creamy soft
Enough
To dip a digit
In and swirl
A whirl of pleasure
And anticipation
At my fingertip
This is offered up for Alan's delicious prompt at poetryjaam.blogspot.com about glorious ice cream confections and "what would you top with a cherry?" Melted chocolate, chocolate frosting, chocolate mousse, ganache--you get the idea..short and sweet. Enjoy!
Mighty delightful words ... 'swirl a whirl of pleasure' :))
ReplyDeleteHi Helen!! This was a really fun prompt, wasn't it:-)
DeleteLove dipping that digit in and taking a taste before it's all done! Now I'm thinking of creamy chocolate frosting for dessert tonight!
ReplyDeleteHi Robyn!! Me too--my sister and I used to fight over who got to lick the beaters:-) Enjoy your dessert tonight!
DeleteOh this is sense-ually evocative. I love the idea of dipping in a digit and swirling (and then licking the finger aftewards of course). Very nice!!
ReplyDeleteHi Mary!! I was playing around with the "licking" part, just couldn't make it work--thank you for joining in the fun:-)
DeleteHi Mary!! Thank you-tried to fit "licked" in somewhere and it just didn't work--thank for joining in the fun:-)
DeleteI love this! Short and sweet indeed. :)
ReplyDeleteHi Rachel!! So glad you enjoyed it and didn't think it was asunious...lol:-)
DeleteUnasinous? Never! Not here. :)
Deleteyummy and delicious poem ! Have a sweet weekend!
ReplyDeleteHi Kathe!! I hope that you have a sweet weekend, too!! Thank you very much :-)
DeleteI like the start to this - I'm into it by the end of the first line...
ReplyDeleteHi!! Thank you very much that's a wonderful compliment :-)
DeleteA whirl of pleasure -just like your words, this made me smile
ReplyDeleteHi Alan!! That's my goal--thank you very much:-)
DeleteLove those words and the image they conjure ... 'to dip a digit in and swirl a whirl of pleasure!
ReplyDeleteHi Susan!! So glad you enjoyed it--thank you:-)
DeleteSounds quite yummy! I'd like to dip my finger in as well.
ReplyDeleteHi Peggy!! Come on over, I'll whip up some ganache for us:-)
DeleteYou're killing me! I didn't have any pudding today. :-) I am going to empty the freezer when I get home. I'll tell my wife whom to blame! :-)
ReplyDeleteGreetings from London.
hmmmmmm.....one word: deLiCious.... smiles
ReplyDeleteHi Claudia!! Thank you for stopping by for a taste:-)
DeleteLOL! You're making me hungry!
ReplyDeletesmiles...hope you are having a great vacation...go anywhere fun?
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