Wednesday, March 5, 2014

Uncorked

The fizz
The bliss
I find in
This
From the sparkly
Stream
To the golden
Gleam
Pour me a flute
And two for my friends
Cheers!
Here's
To joy
That never
Ends

A toast to Peggy at Poetry Jam poetryjaam.blogspot.com who prompted us to write about bottles.  I love champagne, always a happy drink, and one meant to be shared.  So cheers!  :-)


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26 comments:

  1. GabriellaMarch 5, 2014 at 9:52 PM

    Sara, I love your lovely little ode to champagne! I also enjoy this drink and love it when I have occasions to celebrate.

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    1. SaravMarch 6, 2014 at 8:02 AM

      Hi Gabriella! It is so fun, isn't it? Cheers! :-)

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  2. MaryMarch 5, 2014 at 9:57 PM

    Cheers to you too, Sara! There is nothing more celebratory than a glass or two of champagne. Smiles.

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    1. SaravMarch 6, 2014 at 8:03 AM

      Hi Mary! Thank you for the cheers and the smiles...another reason to celebrate! :-)

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  3. Brian MillerMarch 5, 2014 at 10:31 PM

    smiles...i can feel the joy in this...it curls the corners of my mouth in a smile....

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    1. SaravMarch 6, 2014 at 8:04 AM

      Hi Brian! It was a fun write..you might say it just poured out of me...:-)

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  4. GailMarch 5, 2014 at 11:13 PM

    Full of joy and life. I like it.

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    1. SaravMarch 6, 2014 at 8:05 AM

      Hi Gail! Much like your poetry, always full of life. Thank you :-)

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  5. Wendy BourkeMarch 6, 2014 at 1:42 AM

    A fun poem - and beverage. I'm in ! ! !

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  6. Sumana RoyMarch 6, 2014 at 7:26 AM

    nice bubble of happiness....cheers

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    1. SaravMarch 6, 2014 at 8:07 AM

      Hi Sumana! What a poetic compliment! Thank you :-)

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  7. ayalaMarch 6, 2014 at 8:00 AM

    Smiles....and cheers!

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  8. ClaudiaMarch 6, 2014 at 10:56 AM

    oh i like ...the joy is palpable in this...cheers...smiles

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    1. SaravMarch 6, 2014 at 6:38 PM

      Hi Claudia! I'm always happy to share joy. Thank you for the smiles :-)

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  9. Donna SmithMarch 6, 2014 at 12:10 PM

    The poem was cheerful and well written from "the fizz" at the top, to the "end" at the bottom.

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    1. SaravMarch 6, 2014 at 6:39 PM

      Hi Donna! Thank you very much for such a lovely compliment :-)

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  10. PeggyMarch 6, 2014 at 12:18 PM

    Thanks for the toast Sara! This poem definitely has a happy feel to it. Lots of joy.

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    1. SaravMarch 6, 2014 at 6:40 PM

      Hi Peggy! You're very welcome :-) Thank you, too!

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  11. alan1704March 7, 2014 at 2:18 AM

    Love it, full of life and fizz. Well Done.

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  12. kaykualaMarch 8, 2014 at 4:24 AM

    It would be fun with good company! Lovely Sara!

    Hank

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  13. HelenMarch 8, 2014 at 9:21 PM

    I enjoyed this immensely ... like a fine flute of the finest champagne. (now say that after a few of them :)

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  14. artbyraeMarch 10, 2014 at 11:45 PM

    Cheers to an open bottle of friendship...great photo and poem

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  15. IntelliblogMarch 11, 2014 at 5:03 PM

    A few drinks with good company - nicely captured in your poem.

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  16. Sharp Little PencilMarch 14, 2014 at 4:09 PM

    I never drink champagne alone! It calls for company. Funny that you visited my "birthday party" and now here I am, adult beverages being served. Loved your "better than sex" comment, ha ha.

    This poem made me smile. The internal rhyme, the way your words actually "bubble forth" on the page. Magic! Amy

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Your words are wonderful! Thanks for popping in--I'll be over in a snap!

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