Wednesday, March 5, 2014

Uncorked

The fizz
The bliss
I find in
This
From the sparkly
Stream
To the golden
Gleam
Pour me a flute
And two for my friends
Cheers!
Here's
To joy
That never
Ends

A toast to Peggy at Poetry Jam poetryjaam.blogspot.com who prompted us to write about bottles.  I love champagne, always a happy drink, and one meant to be shared.  So cheers!  :-)


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  1. Sara, I love your lovely little ode to champagne! I also enjoy this drink and love it when I have occasions to celebrate.

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    1. Hi Gabriella! It is so fun, isn't it? Cheers! :-)

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  2. Cheers to you too, Sara! There is nothing more celebratory than a glass or two of champagne. Smiles.

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    1. Hi Mary! Thank you for the cheers and the smiles...another reason to celebrate! :-)

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  3. smiles...i can feel the joy in this...it curls the corners of my mouth in a smile....

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    1. Hi Brian! It was a fun write..you might say it just poured out of me...:-)

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  4. Full of joy and life. I like it.

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    1. Hi Gail! Much like your poetry, always full of life. Thank you :-)

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  5. A fun poem - and beverage. I'm in ! ! !

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  6. nice bubble of happiness....cheers

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    1. Hi Sumana! What a poetic compliment! Thank you :-)

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    1. Hi Ayala! Thank you and Cheers!:-)

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  8. oh i like ...the joy is palpable in this...cheers...smiles

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    1. Hi Claudia! I'm always happy to share joy. Thank you for the smiles :-)

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  9. The poem was cheerful and well written from "the fizz" at the top, to the "end" at the bottom.

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    1. Hi Donna! Thank you very much for such a lovely compliment :-)

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  10. Thanks for the toast Sara! This poem definitely has a happy feel to it. Lots of joy.

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    1. Hi Peggy! You're very welcome :-) Thank you, too!

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  11. Love it, full of life and fizz. Well Done.

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  12. It would be fun with good company! Lovely Sara!

    Hank

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  13. I enjoyed this immensely ... like a fine flute of the finest champagne. (now say that after a few of them :)

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  14. Cheers to an open bottle of friendship...great photo and poem

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  15. A few drinks with good company - nicely captured in your poem.

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  16. I never drink champagne alone! It calls for company. Funny that you visited my "birthday party" and now here I am, adult beverages being served. Loved your "better than sex" comment, ha ha.

    This poem made me smile. The internal rhyme, the way your words actually "bubble forth" on the page. Magic! Amy

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Your words are wonderful! Thanks for popping in--I'll be over in a snap!