Monday, May 7, 2012

Night Harmony

Prompt -- Take a favorite line from and earlier poem and rework it

Night Harmony

The full moon hums a golden note
The ocean picks up the tune
Waves pluck the gleaming water 
While clouds heavy with dew 
Drop low and rumble bass
And miles away
A pond answers with silver whispers

1 comment:

  1. Ohhhhh. LOVE "A pond answers with silver whispers"
    And something very ethereal about it being "a pond" instead of "the pond." Love the word choices here Sara.


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