Prompt -- Take a favorite line from and earlier poem and rework it
Night Harmony
The full moon hums a golden note
The ocean picks up the tune
Waves pluck the gleaming water
While clouds heavy with dew
Drop low and rumble bass
And miles away
A pond answers with silver whispers
Night Harmony
The full moon hums a golden note
The ocean picks up the tune
Waves pluck the gleaming water
While clouds heavy with dew
Drop low and rumble bass
And miles away
A pond answers with silver whispers
Ohhhhh. LOVE "A pond answers with silver whispers"
ReplyDeleteAnd something very ethereal about it being "a pond" instead of "the pond." Love the word choices here Sara.