Reflected in you
I see a lovely combination
Of parental DNA
(not that I'm partial or anything)
I see hope and fear
Mine and yours
Mistakes, too
Mine and yours
But mostly I see
Proof of heaven
Like the first time
I held you, uncovered those
Ten perfect toes
And incredibly long fingers
Long before I knew
How much you would make me
Laugh out loud, gnash my teeth
Glow with love
The minute your eyes met mine
I was a gone girl
This poem is for the prompt at Poetry Jam poetryjaam.blogspot.com where Mary gave us the incredibly fun prompt of writing a poem using the title of one of New York Times Best Sellers; The title is from "Reflected In You" by Sylvia Day, a story of fiction; and I included two other titles, just for fun (and I couldn't pick just one) "Proof of Heaven" by Eben Alexander-nonfiction; and "Gone Girl" by Gillian Flynn, a mystery. This is also for the prompt at Poets United, poetryblogroll.blogspot.com where we are asked to write about a gift that gave me a happy heart, what popped into my head was when I called my mom to let her know she was going to be a grandma--all she could say was "Oh!Oh!Oh!" My boys and my stepdaugher are the best gifts I've ever been given. And I'm sharing this poem with Open Link Night where gifts are always welcome dversepoets.com :-) Happy Thanksgiving everyone--I'm thankful for all of you!!
I see a lovely combination
Of parental DNA
(not that I'm partial or anything)
I see hope and fear
Mine and yours
Mistakes, too
Mine and yours
But mostly I see
Proof of heaven
Like the first time
I held you, uncovered those
Ten perfect toes
And incredibly long fingers
Long before I knew
How much you would make me
Laugh out loud, gnash my teeth
Glow with love
The minute your eyes met mine
I was a gone girl
This poem is for the prompt at Poetry Jam poetryjaam.blogspot.com where Mary gave us the incredibly fun prompt of writing a poem using the title of one of New York Times Best Sellers; The title is from "Reflected In You" by Sylvia Day, a story of fiction; and I included two other titles, just for fun (and I couldn't pick just one) "Proof of Heaven" by Eben Alexander-nonfiction; and "Gone Girl" by Gillian Flynn, a mystery. This is also for the prompt at Poets United, poetryblogroll.blogspot.com where we are asked to write about a gift that gave me a happy heart, what popped into my head was when I called my mom to let her know she was going to be a grandma--all she could say was "Oh!Oh!Oh!" My boys and my stepdaugher are the best gifts I've ever been given. And I'm sharing this poem with Open Link Night where gifts are always welcome dversepoets.com :-) Happy Thanksgiving everyone--I'm thankful for all of you!!
ah the first time holding them...so much anxious energy in that moment...and relief...a little bit of heaven they truly are...big smiles from this one..
ReplyDeleteHi Brian!! Thought you might appreciate this, know how much you love your kids :-) You're right about that anxious energy and then relief!
DeleteAh, Sara, you used the same title I did (plus threw in a few more as well). So wonderful to look at a child and see what all is reflected, isn't it? This is the most wonderful feeling. And, of course, you are not partial. (Smile.)Happy Thanksgiving to you!
ReplyDeleteHi Mary!! Great minds, and all that right:-) Thank you for the smiles and warm wishes--always delightful talking with you.
DeleteAww.... and such a beautiful mother's pride... this is so lovely. Yes, what a gift and joy.
ReplyDeleteTruly lovely poem.
RYN: Praying now the cease fire holds..
Hi Brenda!! Thank you so much :-) I'm right there praying with you that the cease fire holds.
DeleteLovely to see the parents reflected in a child. I personal reflection of the poem too with the memories. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteHi Peggy!! It is always interesting to see what's reflected, and then, what's reflected in me too :-) Thank you.
DeleteThe gift prompt made us feel the same way about our kids! The book title was perfect for the poem. Happy thanksgiving!
ReplyDeleteHi Robyn!! Really enjoy your visits :-) Thank you for the happy wishes!
Deletesmiles...i love this...the thankfulness and warmth..the overwhelming emotions...brought me back to the birth of my kids as well...such a wonder..isn't it all fun that all parents count fingers and toes..? smiles
ReplyDeleteHi Claudia!! It is a true miracle, and there's something about those fingers and toes--thank you for the smiles :-)
DeleteOh yes, with the meeting of the eyes I was a "gone girl" too. So true, all of it, from a face hurting from laughing so much OR from gnashing the teeth in worry.
ReplyDeleteHi Libby!! Welcome--very nice sharing memories with you, one year I got 4 crowns from all that gnashing--much better now :-)
Deletethis is lovely, Sara! and i know just what you mean. even though i am now a grandmother, i still remember the first time i looked into my daughter's eyes. {and both grandchildren!}
ReplyDeleteHappy Thanksgiving to you, dear!
thank you for joining in at Poetry Jam!
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dani
Hi Dani!! Awww--you made me get all sentimental--it is a magic moment, thank you for the kinds wishes and Happy Thanksgiving--always love jamming with you :-)
DeleteYour words perfectly reflect the feelings and emotions of that moment ... well done !!
ReplyDeleteHi G.S.!! Thank you so much, always enjoy your words :-)
DeleteAren't those little hands and toes precious ~ Love your grateful words ~ Happy Thanksgiving to you and your family ~
ReplyDeleteHi Grace!! Love those toes and fingers, they amazed me--so tiny and perfect. :-) Thank you for the Thanksgiving wishes!
DeleteA special exciting moment in every parent's life. Lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteHi Cressida!! Thank you so much for the visit and the compliment--look forward to seeing your blog soon :-)
DeleteYour poem is lush with sweetness ... Happy Turkey Day!!
ReplyDeleteHi Helen!! You always say the most delightful things--we had a great Turkey day--hope that you did too :-)
DeleteI love the prompt and you've done with it. What a beauty of a poeam. Many thanks.
ReplyDeleteGreetinsg from London.
Hi there! Thank you so much for the visit :-) Looking forward to seeing what you've been up to!
DeleteBeautiful, I love this gift! @>----------
ReplyDeleteHi Ella!! Love your rose :-) Thank you for that, and for your great prompt ideas!
DeleteWell, I for one AM partial - to the poem. Congrats on a well crafted piece. It works well.
ReplyDeleteHi Dave!! You gave me a big smile with that comment--thank you so much :-)
Deletebeautiful!!
ReplyDeleteHi Sreeja!! So nice to see you again--thank you! :-)
DeleteAwe. Every parent can relate to this. Those perfect little fingers and toes, and the moment their eyes lock with yours... sigh
ReplyDeleteHi Margaret!! Thank you for sharing in the awe of little fingers and toes :-)
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